I need help with wording for an invitation poem?

Laura G

My sister in law and I are planning a joint birthday party for our 2 and 3 year old daughters. We are making up our own invitations and we are stuck on some of the wording. We want guests know if they come for one child but don't know the other child, do not feel obligated to provide gifts for both. However we do feel that mentioning gifts is tacky. Here is what we have so far:


Cousins at heart,
Cousins at play, Kyleigh and Sabrina are having a special day!
A birthday of three

and a birthday of two,
The party won't be the same without you.

***Even though the party is for two,Doesn't mean you need to spend for two***.
Our main goal is to have you here,
To help us celebrate one more year!


The lines between the asteriks is what we want to change. There are too many "two's". And its important to keep it light hearted. Any suggestions?

Answer
Sabrina and cousin Kyleigh
Are having a special day.
It is a party for their birthday,
Please come and make it three.

Having a party just for two
Would not be to much fun
So this invitation is for you
to eat and play out in the sun.


Just a thought.

i need help with an invitation poem/wording ?

Laura G

My sister in law and I are planning a joint birthday party for our 2 and 3 year old daughters. We are making up our own invitations and we are stuck on some of the wording. We want guests know if they come for one child but don't know the other child, do not feel obligated to provide gifts for both. However we do feel that mentioning gifts is tacky. Here is what we have so far:

Cousins at heart,
Cousins at play,
Kyleigh and Sabrina are having a special day!
A birthday of three and a birthday of two,
The party won't be the same without you.
***Even though the party is for two,
Doesn't mean you need to spend for two***.
Our main goal is to have you here,
To help us celebrate one more year!

The lines between the asteriks is what we want to change. There are too many "two's". And its important to keep it light hearted. Any suggestions?

Answer
even though the party's a double
you don't' have to go too much trouble





hope this helps!

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